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November 1996 Newsletter Article

Title: College Essays- Tips from the folks at Kaplan

Author: Ray Lauenstein

 

College Essays: Tips from the folks at Kaplan. Your essay will be read and it counts. Here are some suggestions from Kaplan Educational Centers:

1. Timing Don’t procrastinate especially if the school allows you to send in your essay after you submit your application. Mail them together if possible.

2. Feedback Have a family member, friend or parent look over your essay; encourage their honest comments.

3. Rough Drafts- Always write a rough draft and let it "cool off" for a couple of days. You’ll catch more mistakes.

4. Proofread- Double check for spelling and grammatical errors before you mail it in. Spell checkers are not fail safe; use a dictionary.

5. Creative- Use anecdotes, bits of dialogue and humor. But don’t forget about structure, grad the readers attention at first and tie the essay together.

6. Concise- Be brief. The best essays are not necessarily the log ones. Admissions officers read thousands of essays, do not try their patience.

7. Casual- College essays aren’t formal writing exercises. The tone should be casual not chatty.

8. Careful- Make sure the essay is grammatically correct, spelled properly and punctuated properly.

Additional Tips:

Make your essays as personal as possible.

Aviod the "cute" extras such as lengthy resumes, photos, homemade gifts, etc.

Include non-school achievements and responsibilities such as church volunteer projects, a job promotion, taking care of your little brother after school.

Look into College Link , 800-994-8180, a program with 800 colleges that has one electronic questionnaire; or Common Application a generic questionnaire accepted in place of many colleges own application. Ask your guidance counselor for more info.

Source: Newsweek/Kaplan How to get into college, 1997 edition. 


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